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"Hey baby. <3"

                    "Hey. (:"

"How are you?"

                    "Alright, you?"

"Doing good. Just alright, though?"

                   "Yeah, don't worry about it."
                         (I'm nothing worth worrying about.)

"Alright, as long as you're sure…"

                   "Of course. (:"
                         (The fear forces me to lie.)

"So, what are you up to?"

                  "Nothing, you?"
                         (There's blood everywhere.)

"Watching TV. Want to hang out later?"

                  "Can't, sorry. I have stuff to do. ):"
                         (I'm frightened of what you would do.)

"Ahh, okay. Some other time?"

                  "Actually, I can't. I'm moving."
                         (It's for the best...I hope.)

"What? When? Where?"

                  "Tomorrow. To another town, far from here."
                          (Where judgement cannot find me.)

"So...I'll never see you again? Are we breaking up right now?"

                  "I'm sorry. I didn't want it to be like this."
                          (You deserve so much better.)

"Oh. I see. Bye, then."

                  "Goodbye."
                         (You'll forget me soon enough. Everyone will.)
A text conversation between a boyfriend and his girlfriend who he doesn't know is suicidal.
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HeterodoxHipster Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my. I've been reading sad stuff on here and this is one of them that made me cry :(
Truly great writing ;)
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Shy-Chey Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Photographer
It's so true, I can feel the emotion, this is beautifully done :)
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megamiaki364 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why does this look so familiar?...it's so easy to miss the tiny lies one makes so that no one knows what's going on...and often when I felt like this, all I wanted was for someone to notice and talk me out of it....

This is perfect.
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sugarbabbie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Writer
I love how you have the caption of what the person is rlly thinking!!! and i rlly like the idea of the txting kind of poem and stuff
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:iconthe-writing-pony:
The-writing-pony Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you so much! (:
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sugarbabbie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome
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SapphireDean Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow that's so sad
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oldbookslover Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like how you made it like reality.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...
This cuts deep
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The-writing-pony Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. c:
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